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Aaaaaaaaaaah I'm so busy lately, I'm impressed I managed to finish before time.
For the  competition~The first round consists in dressing up our character in evening gown : D I was going to dress her up in a crazier color, but I changed my mind. Lulz I keep changing painting styles so she barely looks like herself in this one haha *fails* And FFFFF I changed some settings in SAI and this cool brush came up, I love it *0* Comments
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Okay, so first of all, I absolutely love designing clothes. So I love it when artists put pretty clothes on their figures. So naturally, I automatically love this. Now since I can't flippin' critique anymore because I lack a subscription, I'm going to be a rebel and do it here instead k? :U First off: Her dress is absolutely gorgeous. I'm not too fond of the top area near her bust, it seems a bit textureless; but man. The farther you go down, the better it gets (ohlawl). I love how the gown transitions from the waist to the skirt--the folds are beautiful, and I love how everything sort of bunches up in the back for the bow. And the skirt texture is gorgeous. That has got to be my favorite (I actually have two favorite parts~) of the gown. I've always been fond of the ruffly, feathery, full-skirt texture. It always looks nice. Second favorite part? The colouring. I love how you put greens, yellows and blue in the fabric, along with the red you tied in from the background. It really looks fantastic, and right now I'm envious of how you work with colours >:I The background is simple and appropriate. The sparkles = nice touch  </nice> <critic> But almost everything about the model doesn't seem to match up with the dress. I'm sure she'd look so much more beautiful with a less casual hairstyle. Her grip on that dress (despite her very delicate facial expression) is a little less than dainty.  And, unlike the dress, the skin shading seems much less colorful. Try shading with a bit more depth, and try adding in some more of those gorgeous hues you were able to work so perfectly into the dress.This is a gorgeous painting and I want to draw clothes now. :< W-whoa little sausage, what a long sexy comment *-*
I'm going to work more on the bust area, I agree it doesn't have much texture, I sort of... went totally crazy with the lower part and I had loads of fun, but I got bored with the bust for some reason  Teehee~ Sparkly curtains were mentioned in the presentation for the scene so I thought I'd add them even though following the scene wasn't mandatory  *secretly loves sparkles*Haha Omg the poor girl, I admit I rushed the skin like there was no tomorrow XDD That's something I wanted to fix and I will fosho. Now that it's uploaded in time I can change a few things on the way ;D Thanks a lot for the lovely comment, I will follow your advices when I update it because I agree with every one of them : D -- ~ The two rules of procrastination: 1) Do it today. 2) Tomorrow will be today tomorrow ~  This looks great, You've improved a BUNCH since we last talked... which was a WHILE back. It's very nice
-- This Is Where the pain begins, You stab that blade into my skin. Deeper and deeper it goes, Numbing my body to all those, Around us, They fade. Ever since that messed up day. I'll give it all to gain a smile from you, So use to blade to do what you Thanks a lot >3<
Yeaah I haven't seen your name for some time ;} -- ~ The two rules of procrastination: 1) Do it today. 2) Tomorrow will be today tomorrow ~ Aghf
I feel so accomplished  Your very welcome, thanks for valuing my opinion like a good princess.~ Sorry, I was getting lazy on here, letting real life mess with the computer.
I'm Happy you remember me love! -- This Is Where the pain begins, You stab that blade into my skin. Deeper and deeper it goes, Numbing my body to all those, Around us, They fade. Ever since that messed up day. I'll give it all to gain a smile from you, So use to blade to do what you  Wah, this is really pretty <3
 wow, que buen contest! y que hermosa que te quedo, me encanta el vestido y las transparencias.
XD entre a ver que onda el concurso, pero tanto en ingles me mato, todavia puedo unirme? -- ..／l.、 ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７ l、ﾞ ~ヽ じしf_, )ノ Mewh??  ~Pirate Queen~  Hablo español - I Speak in english, but bad  ohoho dark
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Critiques
El contraste entre partes más detalladas y otras menos definidas me parece una técnica genial.
* El vestido es espectacular. Me fascina como con "simple" pinceladas conseguiste una variedad de texturas y un movimiento clarísimos. La parte que más disfruto y no puedo dejar de mirar es la cintura, como define la figura y le da todo el toque femenino al dibujo.
* La cara de ella es preciosa, los ojos y la mirada son entre sugestivos y dulces. El sombreado está muy bien resuelto. El verde como tono contrastante funciona muy bien. Aunque yo hubiera elegido un verde más oscuro todavia. Tal vez incluso más saturado para que jugara con las tonalidades rojas del fondo. Eso le daría mucho más volumen y resaltaría más las partes con luces.
* Los hombros los veo un poco anchos, disminuirlos un poco y redondearlos, la van a hacer más femenina y delicada.
* Creo que la falla principal está en la mano. Desde mi punto de vista, es una parte en el dibujo que pide atención. Los ojos no pueden evitar pasar de la cara a ese brazo extendido que es en definitiva, el lenguaje corporal del personaje. Yo pondría más detalles, así como está detallada la cara de ella.
srs foxy is srs xD <33~
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